Tags m/m, Reluc, Oral, Cons

Chapter II


Ryan darted forward after breaking eye contact with the bigger syn, making his way back to the kitchen, sliding the last two or three feet on his socks, gliding to a smooth stop on the glassy granite floor in front of the stove. His hands moved almost without input from his brain, plating two salads on gleaming china, and setting forth seven different dressings between them onto a serving tray. He tread more carefully on his trip back out to the dining room, making sure he wouldn’t slip on the hardwood.

Practiced hands slid the salads smoothly in place in front of Mark first, then his guest. He noted with some interest that the other skinjob was seated in a chair next to her, and that the pillow he had brought down earlier was next to Mark’s chair. Next went the dressings, and he wordlessly set his owner’s favorite onto the table, and the other six neatly within reach of the red haired woman two seats away, keeping away from Jared’s side of the table for now.

“What would you like to drink sir?” He aimed the question not with his face, speaking quietly out of the corner of his mouth, eyes finding a spot on the floor to watch intently.

Mark looked across to guest. “Marie? Do you have a preference? I’m sorry to say my cellar is not as well stocked as I would like, I simply don’t make the time to get out to the vineyard.”

“Do you have a good Chardonnay?” She inquired, a smile tweaking at the edges of her mouth as though there was some joke to this for her.

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Tags: F/m, slow, reluc, pegging. Incidental M/m oral.

Chapter III

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Ryan lay, only for a moment.

He said to get up. You have to clean that up and go after him. But he said when I was finished.. You know exactly what he meant. You have to get up and go. Can’t I just lay here for a few more minutes? This will only get worse if you take too long. You know better than that. You can make him happy if you follow his orders. He’s nice when he’s happy.

With that thought echoing in his head, he drew himself slowly to a sitting position, stripping his socks from his feet, he set them on his pants, which he set to one side of the room. His shirt followed, white cotton drizzled with the wet, sticky fluid Jared had left behind. He paused with the shirt in mid hand, and used it to wipe up the slowly spreading pool of semen he’d been unable to swallow. The shirt then followed the pants on the sideline, folded haphazardly, dampening the fabric under them.

He stood up, and began clearing the table. He worked quickly, methodically, and precisely, and the work was done shortly, leaving behind a spotless table, and the small pile of clothes. A glance around the room set his mind at ease, temporarily at least. He returned to the kitchen and leaned down into the ample sink and began to wash his hair out. A hard pressure made contact with his head, then his left shoulder, then something touched his body down along the back.

“You just wash up in the sink like that?” Jared asked, leaning down and using his size to pin Ryan against the counter, and keep his head under the stream. “It’s a good solution, but doesn’t it leave the sink a little dirty?”

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This is even better science fiction than erotica, and Ryan is a very sympathetic character. Honestly, I hope he gains his freedom, and some justice, and that, through him, we see the wider world that he lives in.

End Syn Slavery Now! Full Civil Rights for Syns!

>>715
What other pairings would be more interesting to read about then? Combinations of M/m don't draw much interest here I noticed.

Well, I can’t argue with that.

Jen’s fingers traced along my neck and undid the top button of my shirt. “Show some chest,” she said, her voice honeyed and her eyes smoky. She undid my next button and I caught her hands and shot her a smirk. She gasped, and her legs sprung around me, she snapped her teeth.

I growled, so low I hardly noticed that I had even begun making the sound. I let go of her hands, but only long enough to embrace her around the waist and lift her from the island. Jen squealed as we spun around, her fingers gripping my hair and her hips grinding against me.

I carried her into the den, intending to put her on the couch, but we wound up on the floor. “Blue eyes,” I said to her, watching her eyes open wide as she began to writhe under me.

“Yes,” she replied, slow and not really finishing the word before we met in a kiss. Jen was ravenous, her tongue lashing out at me, sliding behind my teeth and rolling along my lips. I felt her heart pounding through her chest, her legs twining up with mine and her bare toes touching to my ankles. She panted when I broke away to play at her neck. When I moved down to her neck, she whimpered. I pulled my hands free and ran then over her, from her neck and then around the curve of her breasts to the the tie of her chemise. “No.”

I cocked an eyebrow, but Jen had already given me a shove off. I rose up and smiled, sprawling on the couch and looking at her inquisitively.

“You’re overdressed.” She said, and she rose up to kneel at my feet. She tugged down my pants and she gripped my cock. She leaned in and began to lick my shaft with long passes of her tongue. “I love sucking your cock,” she mewled. And then her lips sealed around my cock.

Her mouth was warm, her tongue silky and agile as it rolled around and around my cock. Her fingers cupped my balls and kneaded as she quivered on the floor. When Jen finally took a breath, she came away to lean back on her legs, presenting herself to me.

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BUMP FOR HEAVENS SAKE

PLZ SUR MAY I HAS SUM MOAR?

Chapter 2
We decided to go to a dinner. Where else do you go after weird consensual castration sex? I had experienced her castrating hand job twice before, but this was the first time I had really been able to sit down and talk to her about it.
“Well, he wasn’t really my boyfriend per se, he was the first boy I ever made out with.” Olive was dissecting a corned beef ruben sandwich with a knife and fork.
“Yeah, but what happened?”
“Well we had made out a couple of times—“
“Your freshman year of high school.”
“—Yes. I had touched his cock and even put it in my mouth a couple of times. I soon learned how to make him cum. He felt me up and even tried to get me off once or twice, but he couldn’t get me to cum. He had no idea what he was doing and neither did I.” Olive carved out a perfect ¾ inch square of the ruben sandwich, dipped it into the thousand island dressing on the side, and popped it into her mouth.
“Wait, so this doesn’t happen every time you make someone cum?”
“No, it doesn’t, I’m getting to that. You see, every time we made out, I always knew for some reason that I wanted to squeeze Chris’ balls. I knew that squeezing his balls was somehow special for him. Turns out, that was his submission point.” Olive was back to performing surgery on the sandwich. “You see, everyone has a thing—some sort of forbidden act that they secretly want performed on them, but think they don’t like. For you, it’s your nipples, for Chris it was having his balls squeezed. When I touch someone’s submission point, and make them cum, they shrivel up.” She punctuated the sentence by popping another perfect cube of sandwich into her mouth.
“So you just … know submission points just by looking at people?”
“Yup.”
“How?”
“Don’t know, I just do. Our waitress for example, for her it’s being pinned down and having someone spit in her mouth.”
“Ulgh!”
“You’d be surprised how common that one is for girls. For guys a lot of times its stuff with their ass or their balls. I was friends with a guy in high school who’s submission point was being forced to swallow his own cum.” Olive had moved on to the French fries.

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Chapter 3
Olive and I went out to eat and saw a great movie. She was really close to me tonight, and she had a warm look of desire in her eyes. I think tonight’s gonna be the night. We get in my car and I drive her back to her apartment.
“Do you want to come up?”
“Really? Sure!” We went up to her apartment and started making out, before we even sat down. Before I knew what was happening, she lead me into her bedroom and taking off my clothes.
“I’m ready.”
“Tonight?”
“Tonight’s the night. I love you and I want it to be you John.” Olive’s eyes were welling up with happy tears.
“I love you too, and I’d be honored to.”
Olive and I had been together for 4 months now. Olive had never had a regular relationship, and I wanted to give that to her. We went out and dated like a normal couple. She didn’t want to use her power even though we both enjoyed it. She was tired of being a slave to her power and I wanted to give her a chance to feel what it is like to be normal. We fooled around a bit but no castration. She gave me a blow job in the parking lot after a movie two weeks ago. I diddled her last week in the park after our picnic. Olive was really panicky about losing her virginity, but now she was finally ready.
Olive was lying naked on the bed and beckoning me to join her. I was rock hard and ready. I climbed on top of her and kissed her while my hand explored her pussy. Olive was soaked and ready to fuck. I moved between her legs, pushed her knees back, and got my cock in position. I could see fear in Olive’s eyes, but she gently grabbed my cock and guided it toward her pussy. I accepted her invitation and pushed inside of her.
Olive’s eyes widened and a moan escaped her lips. She wrapped her legs around me and pushed me deeper into her pussy. The fear in her eyes was gone, replaced by a look of hunger. I was gentle at first, but it was soon clear she wanted more. At her urging began to fuck her hard. She pushed back grinding her box against me when I was balls deep. It was going well and we were headed to a wonderful climax when she made her move.
Olive’s fingers found my nipples, and I felt her power surging into me and filling my ball sack. “I-I’m sorry.” I put my hands over hers and smiled to let her know it was ok. The truth is I wanted her to castrate me. It had been so long since we did it. I wasn’t expecting this but it was a delightful development. Olive’s pussy was going to eat me. I was going to shrivel up inside her. Yes I could go with this. I had never felt so much of her power inside me before though. I was trying not to cum because I knew this castration was going to be intense. I slowed down because I was getting close, but Olive had other plans. She pushed me balls deep into her with her legs and squeezed my cock inside her. It was too much. I surrendered to my castration and pumped my cum into her.
My balls were crushed instantly. They made this sickening wet crunch sound. It was so intense it was actually painful. In a weird sort of way, the pain was enjoyable. I let out a pathetic whimper just as Olive threw her head back and started screaming. She was cumming hard as my cock rapidly shrunk inside her. By the time Olive was done cumming my dick was completely gone. She completely castrated me in about 10 seconds. It was amazing. This wasn’t how I thought this was going to go, but I certainly enjoyed it. I climbed off of Olive.
“I’m all gooey.” Olive explored her messy twat with on hand, and my featureless groin with her other. “I’m sorry John.”
“It’s ok, I liked it.” Olive pulled her hand out of her cream pie and sniffed it. Then she licked her fingers. I was kinda horrified but if I was still a man it would have turned me on.

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Here's a new link.

http://www.mediafire.com/?j41178pdyjr20d7

Is CoC on /f/ right now? It should be.

SAGE has been used.

Synthetics, or Renee, is available on storiesonline.net/s/60167 with a free registration. Aplgirl is writing more after she either finishes or abandons an m/m story on the other chan elit board.

No joy on the other one though.

Derik's Luck, because I like screwing up character's names and not spelling them right. At the moment, it isn't on my site because I had this vague hope of editing it, cleaning up some of the worse of the English, and republishing it.

It is "next" on my list after I finish Puppy Mill.

Good, keep it coming:)

>>649
i'll try to i just got a few games so I might distracted for a bit

OP again, forgot to tag or anything...usual M/F, nothing fancy

he ends up tutoring a little girl that doesn't like authority, and he makes friends with her by breaking some rules of the school, like no cussing and such. as he gets to know her he finds out he is attracted to her and slowly comes to terms with his pedo feeling. and that about as far as i managed to make it before the site it was originally on got shut down. please help me find it again. i'll settle for at least the stories name. please and thank you to any willing to help.

I have posted this on a couple sites and have still received no response. please, help me asap.

I remember that story, and I remember it not being any longer than he gives her a kiss. If it has been finished though, I would love to read it.

even though it had no sex up to the point i made it in the story it still had potential to be one of the best loli love story i ever read. and i would love to get my hands on a completed version, or even just what was out there. so any help would be appreciated

>>604
>I found your site through an erotic literature search
Priceless.

There's nothing we can offer you, except this one advise: Do not advertise yourself on imageboards. Cheers.

>>604
This isn't really on-topic for the board, but what the hell.

Imageboards are for users to post stuff, and spamming your own links is very frowned upon. You don't seem to be trying to spam, so the mods might lenient. Speaking of the mods, they are the people you'd want to contact about any advertisement here, but as far as I know they don't want to have any. An on-topic text ad might be better though, so you should email them to talk about it. [email protected] would probably be the person to talk to.

On the other hand, I'm not sure how much traffic from here would help you. Imageboard users aren't known for spending lots of money or decorating their homes very well. You might be better off with a google ad. I think you can link your ad to certain search phrases, for example "erotic art". Here's the website for that:

http://www.google.com/ads/searchads/

Another option, that might work very well for you, since your product is erotic and you seem to be fine with advertising on smutty websites, is to look for webcomics with nudity, since I know a lot of them have trouble getting and holding advertisers. They'll likely sell space for cheap and have artistically inclined readers. Project Wonderful is a great tool for helping webcomics and advertisers get in contact, and they have some nice search tools so that you can stay in a small budget.

https://www.projectwonderful.com/

I hope this helps!

>>543
what am I the only one here?

>>544
No, but 99chan has a very poor response rate.

It was a lot of fun, right up the "transitions" line, then it ended too quickly for me. I know it was intentional, but it kind of killed the mood.

>>545
Sorry about the boner killer, like I said i have been having some issues in my daily life so the writing has not been as much of a focus, plus I have this weird inability to write something if i can't plot it out quickly in my head all the way to the end, so when the story started to run a little long to me, i panicked and stalled. When I realized this I forced myself to write out the rest over a shorter period of time than i normally would have chosen. It fucks my ability to write other things besides porn and super short stories. Oh and word to the wise, never ever fucking get t mobile internet

I might not be able to respond to requests or post for a little while I'm dropping t mobile shitty internet and waiting for my neighbor to get Xfinity so i can go in on it with him

>>548
Interestingly, I'm trying to move to T-Mobile. :)

I know the problem about not being able to move fast enough. With PM, I've had the ending planned for an entire year (along with all the major events) and I find that by the time I get to them, I've gone over them so often in my head, I can't write it out.

>>508
I'll try but i'm not sure if I'll be able to, inspiration just hit me during the middle of the night

>>507
okay but just for you and everyone else on the site
writing really isn't that hard so give it a try we need more stories on this board
tags:domination, foot fetish, big cock, and maybe some humiliation due to comparison

Before I even opened my eyes I felt a stinging pain surging through my body, “Hangover, great.” I grumbled aloud as I tried to find my way to the edge of the bed without allowing the cruel sun to cause me anymore pain. “Since when does alcohol leave me in this much pain.’’ I tried to question the actions of last night but none seem to come to mind. I felt a hand squeeze my ass and I realized two things, this hand had squeezed my ass before and, that I was completely nude.
“You’re finally up; I thought I might’ve fucked you into a coma.” My eyes adjusted quickly with these realizations. Her face brought flashes of the night back up to the surface; I remember being at the bar, then her massive cock. “I sucked your dick in the bathroom.” I said as the shock of this settled into my now sober mind.
“I missed you too Captain Obvious.” As she spoke my eyes drifted down her body, she wore a loose fitting robe that barely covered her perky tits. As my eyes drifted lower I saw the outline of her flaccid cock, it looked bigger than mine still.
“Where are my clothes?” I asked, eyes darting back up to met hers.
“Why do you need them?” I couldn’t tell if she was serious or not, her tone seem to change to one of innocence the moment she spoke.
“What have I gotten myself into?” I questioned myself repeatedly in my head, “I’m naked.” I said plainly hoping that another obvious statement would lead her to just giving me my clothes and sending me on my way.
“Uh huh?” She said waiting for a reason to give me back my clothes, still keeping her playfully innocent tone.
“And you’re not,” I said saying whatever came to mind,”I’m kind of at a disadvantage here.” I covered my soft cock with one hand to stress it.
She smirked,”Who says that’s a bad thing?” her eyes scanning me now like a predatory animal sizing up her prey.
“I should be going anyway,” I looked around the unfamiliar room, the bed I slid off of was actually rather large, it sat between two windows, with a nightstand on each side. The sheets were a mess like a brawl had occurred on them; the room was clean except for the various pieces of clothing lay around none of which were mine. She must’ve noticed my eyes looking around the room, as I moved toward the door way she stood in, she gripped the other side trapping me there.

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I started to put some of what the tranny said in bold to show the dominance in what she said and some of his thoughts in italics and now i realize that that means nothing here
Okay last part unless i decide to write more and i rewrote some shit she leaves the dildo in his ass I'm gonna post this on ashemaletube as well
tags: much more foot stuff, anal sex, flash backs(that's a fetish right?), brief spanking, anal sex, domination, kinda turns into a love story toward the end there and i actually proof read this one please forgive my mistakes beforehand


Suddenly my memory took back over for her; she was sitting in that same chair with my legs on the arms. She guided the vibrating intruder in and out my ass as she jerked my cock, making me shudder every time it entered me, every once and a while she’d leave the vibrating friend in and squeeze my ass with her free hand. This was the greatest sexual experience of my life, until she ordered me to put my ass in the air. I attempted to stand but my legs felt like jelly, that damn vibrator resting against my prostate buzzing. I fell onto the bed unable to pull my ass in the air. I felt the harsh sting of her hand crash into my tender cheeks. “I said get that bubble butt into the air, now.” Her voice still as clear and ordering through my drunkenness, I still struggled to pull myself into the position she requested, my legs still betraying me. “Now damn it!” she spanked me so many times in those few seconds, my cheeks must’ve turned a shade of red unknown. Finally sick of waiting through my first accidental disobedience, I felt her hands grip my sides her nails digging into my hips, she pushed me into her desired position and gave me another hard spank before pulling out the vibrator. “Get ready, slut.” I felt her cock pressing against my cheeks starting to separate them, then it happened. I remember the immediate feeling of pain and yelling into her mattress, “I love it when my sluts cry.” I didn’t take it all in that would’ve broken me. I imagine I only took the length of the dildo, I don’t think it was even half of her cock. She pressed further causing me to groan louder, “That’s your prostate, isn’t it?” she rubbed the bulb with her massive flesh. I came. Harder than I’ve ever come in my life, I’m not sure if it was does to the buildup of the jerking, dildoing, and spanking or if it was just do to her massive dick taking my anal virginity so quickly. “You came already?” my cock still dripping cum out on puddle forming under it, “It won’t be the last time,’’ she rubbed it still as I moan in an indescribable mix of pleasure and pain. “I’m not stopping until there’s not an inch of my cock that’s not in you, and when that happens I’m going to fill your ass with more cum than you’ll ever shoot.” Her voice is perfect nearly impossible to describe the perfect mix of dominance, lust, and innocence, and ownership over the piece of ass she was making hers. “Get ready, it’s going in you even if it takes all night.’’ She pressed further on, I felt her filling my ass, I wish I knew how big it was. My previous guesses didn’t seem as accurate with it pressing farther into my asshole; I felt it digging deep in me before she stopped, my mind was clouded still by the alcohol and constant pressure on my prostate. My moans must’ve have gotten to her, she withdrew her entire cock from my anus, leaving me feeling empty without it. Before I could grow to miss it she slammed it getting another two or three inches in, my moaning returned with the pressure. “Your bitch button must be really sensitive.” She cooed as she withdrew some and slammed back in. I don’t think my cock had stopped drooling cum since she slammed it back in. “Just a few more inches then you’ll be my bitch officially.” I barely heard her speak through my moans of pleasure and pain. “Get ready this one will hurt the most.” Again she withdrew leaving me with emptiness once more. She didn’t jam it back in without a pause this time, this gave me a moment of clarity as I caught my breath. Before my anus could readjust itself, I felt her hand grip my rather short hair, causing me even more pain. She used my hair to gain leverage for the final slam, at least I hoped it would be the last. My head now up away from the mattress I could hear her grunting and heavy breathing and I assumed she could hear my pained cries. She did it, she slammed it in. I felt her large balls hit mine, she moaned loudly as her flesh disappeared into my ass. “Is she going to cum?’’ the thought of the peace that it would bring me almost seemed heavenly. But then she pulled out and slammed back in, she had stretched it out well enough for her to ram me like a common barslut, but that’s what I was to her. The pain remained but was lessened, it finally was overtaken by the pleasure she was giving me. I came again, even harder than the last time. After what seemed like hours of her rod dragging in and out, always rubbing against my bitch button as she had deemed it. Finally she slammed it in, I felt her balls slam into my own making them hurt, this time was harder than any other. Her entire cock disappeared into me for the first time since she forced her monster down all the way. She left it there for some time, shockingly it grew more. “Is this it?’’ I asked myself again. My ass could barely take it before but now the swelling cock threatened to break me. Before it grew any larger, she exploded. It left even more pressure on my anus as she withdrew, leaving only somewhat of an empty feeling in my ass as her spunk drifted toward the only exit. I felt her presence leave only to return with another toy, “I don’t want any more cum staining my sheets.” She put the butt plug in gently, I doubt that it mattered at this point; I was stretched to my breaking point. I finally felt the butt plug, now that my asshole had somewhat returned to its former shape. I drifted out of my memory and quickly picked back up to listening to her, I don’t know what she would say or do to me if I hadn’t been listening.
“…and I helped my new bitch back to the bed from the bathroom and then you passed out.” She finished almost cheerfully. My cock was still standing at attention, begging to cum. She looked at me, giving me permission to speak I assumed.
“Um, how do I know I’m not ripped up?” I can’t imagine an anal fissure feeling good.
“Don’t worry; I checked before I put the plug in you, you’re fine. It might hurt a little bit for a while; I don’t know what came over me last night. There’s just something about you, makes me wanna fuck your brains out.” Her words did calm me some, she checked my ass for rips too, she cares about me at least. She finally looked down at my twitching cock; she began to climb onto the bed over me, her robe sliding off as she did. “That story really got you hard didn’t it?” she spoke as she got face to face with me, “I take it by that and that large stain you left on my bed that you really enjoy our rough fucking?” her lips almost touched mine as she spoke.
“Yes ma’am.” I spoke quietly, her cock pressing mine down with its sheer weight.
“Wanna fuck my feet till you cum all over them?” she lay on me her large chest keeping her at eye level with me.
“God yes.” She slide off of me and the bed, her cock against my own. She sat back in the chair and peeled off one her dirty blue ankle and handed it to me.
“Get my feet all nice and wet.” She said sweetly, instead of her usually tone. She pressed her bare foot and her dirty socked foot against my face, this was heaven. I inhaled the aroma of them both; I never wanted her to take them away. I dragged tongue across her bare foot; reaching the top I kissed her big toe. I moved to the socked foot and kissed down to her heel and then licked my way back up. She pulled them back and set them at the base of my cock, remembering I was given the one to hold I looked back up at her. She motioned for me to put it my mouth like a gag, I did as she instructed. Just as I placed it in my mouth she gripped my cock with her wet feet and began to stroke my cock. Dragging my foreskin up and over my dick head, I moaned tasting the sweat and dirt of her feet and enjoying every second of it. Before I even realized it, my cock began to throb and without warning exploded on her feet.
“Clean my feet.’’ The dominant tone returning to her voice, I took each foot and slowly licked my hot seed off her feet hoping to please her. “Wanna ride home?” she spoke as she stood up from the change her feet still damp.
“Yes ma’am, but where are my clothes?” I hoped she wouldn’t want me to head outside naked.

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Pretty good but you need to put in Paragraphs like the first one

I'm His Sissy Dog Slut
http://99chan.org/elit/res/515.html but it's not like you wouldn't have seen it

Chapter 5: The Beach
The next day was a great day for going to the beach so we all decided it's what we would do. We all got ready to go to the beach, I put my new boardies on that I bought at the store the other day. They were a little loose with nothing on underneath but I figured that no one would really care. If I went swimming I would just have to be careful they didn’t come untied and I would we sweet, and I would have to try and not get a boner. That didn’t happen. Everyone else was wearing normal bikinis and Ben wore some boardies as well. Cassidy was wearing this 2 piece bikini that had black straps and black segment under the cups of her breast with medium colour blue covering her breasts and a light blue section just above it. As for her bottoms they were just blue and the usual type. This is what I loved most about being up in nelsons bay. We were staying right across from the beach, literally. We walked across the road and started to get set up. But I didn’t quite like where we were, but no one else wanted to move. So I decided to go look for a better place with some better waves and what not, I noticed that there was a spit at the left hand side of the beach and sort of curved away behind it and I wondered what was there, as I had never been there before. Cassidy decided to follow me and we chatted all while we were walking etc, etc. I didn’t realise how far this point was and it was taking over 10 minutes to get there. But as soon as we get there and looked around the corner it was worth it. It was deserted... I don’t know why, it was a small cove that leaded around to another little beach but in order to get there you had to swim to get there.
The water here was calm as a pond, very little waves and when there were they were just little ones that rolled onto the beach. I was actually quite tired from the walk so I decided to go for a swim and ran into the water, and the water was perfect; it was warmer then outside of the water. Cassidy soon followed in behind me tackling into me sending me face first into the water. I didn’t mind as the water was so good. We played around splashing and dunking each other for a while until we both came up to splash water in each other’s faces. But when we surfaced we were inches away from each other’s faces. I could feel her body on mine and vice a versa. We instantly started to make out. I parted her lips with mine and passionately kissing her occasionally meeting our tongues and playing around with them. I had my hands on her back and I was caressing her back and moving down to her ass to lift her up onto my waist so she was eye level with me. She wrapped her legs around my back to hold herself in place. I didn’t let go of her butt, as it was heaven. I could feel my dick getting hard and pressing into her, I knew she could feel as she had started to move back and forth on me to feel it. “How about we take this back to the beach?” I said she was all too happy to comply. She stayed on my hips all the way back to where she had her towel laid out. I placed her on her back and started to kiss her neck and moving down to her breasts. I lifted her back up for a second to undo her bikini strap that was on her back. I started to kiss her breasts in different spots. So pecking her left side of her breast then her middle, then maybe her nipple and so forth. I was also licking and darting my tongue over her nipples circling back and forth around the nipples.
Once I had finished there I continued down to the bottom of her stomach and licked all the way back up her stomach until I got to her breasts. I then stopped and moved back down to her pussy. I slid off the bikini bottoms and went to town. Circling and sucking while incorporating my finger as well. I was flicking and darting my tongue in out and out of her pussy why my finger rubbed the top part of her pussy. It didn’t take long before she was moaning so loud, the Antarctic could probably hear her. At that time I felt her squirt right into my face and all over my tongue. It was the best thing I have ever tasted in my life. So sweet. When she had come down from her wave she had a new found lust in her eyes. I actually was afraid for a second, she threw me into my back and started to dart her tongue inside of my mouth. She then started to lick down my chest and down over my abs all the way to my rock hard cock which was standing at attention. She threw my boardies off and tossed them aside and started to lick from the bottom of the shaft all the way to the tip, that’s when she opened her mouth and started to suck on it. Moving her tongue around my shaft which felt amazing. She continued to suck right down to the bottom of my shaft. I always wondered how girls did that, much be one of their amazing talents. In a matter of minutes I was on the verge of cumming and told her so. She sucked all the way through the orgasm. But once I was done she spat it out.
Oh but was I done there. My cock had sprung back to life and was ready for round 2, I pulled her on top of my and placed her down into my cock and started moving her up and down. She was a little shocked at first but when she realised, she got right into things and started bouncing up and down on my cock. I was fondling her breasts with my hands and kissing her at the same time. Occasionally reaching down with one hand and rubbing the exposed part of her pussy. She was moaning like crazy and I could tell she was about to have another orgasm. I flipped her over and started pumping into her as fast as I could. She went crazy moaning and bucking all over the place. I pulled out and rubbed her pussy as fast as I could. This time there was no squirt but you could tell when she had it as she relaxed. When she calmed down she saw I was still as hard as a rock and started to rub my cock. I didn’t need much as she almost pushed me over the edge but I didn’t want to cum inside her to be safe. “I’m about to cum” I said and she replied with “cum on my breasts” and she directed my cock to her breasts and started to rub faster. About 30 second later it happened. I shot all over her breasts. We both just sat back and relaxed. We ended up just lying on top of each other naked making out for another half an hour or so before we started to head back. We got dressed and as we got dressed I slapped her ass which sent her jumping forward to stop her from losing her balance. She turned around and grabbed my cock and rubbed it a few times “see I can play to”. As we were walking back I would walk behind her and let my cock graze her ass teasing. About half way back I stopped and let my cock relax as everyone would see it if I had a boner.
We got back to the others and told them about the beach that we found and how nice it was and that they should of come. That was a lie we didn’t want them coming at all. Otherwise we wouldn’t have been able to have our intimate time. We all decided that it was time to call it quits and headed back to our apartment. We all had showers to wash off the salt water. Or in our case the sweat from hours of love making.
That night Cassidy had the queen bed as it was her turn. I couldn’t sleep and decided I would pay her a visit. As I slept naked I got a robe from the bottom of my bed and put it on as if anyone was up I didn’t want them seeing my junk. When I got into her room she was facing away from me, I dropped my robe and walked over to her and climbed into bed with her. I wrapped my arms around her waist, this woke her up and she turned around to look at me. “What are you doing?” “I couldn’t sleep” “hmmmk fine by me” and moved closer to me, at this stage she could feel my rising dick. She looked at me kind of puzzled “he’s still happy from this arvo after our session when you grabbed him, he doesn’t like to be teased” “doesn’t he now?” and when she said this she started to rub him under the covers back and forth. I leaned in and kissed her on her lips and we started to make out. I also reached around to her back and unclipped her bra and tossed it to the side of the bed. She then stopped rubbing my cock and slide out of her panties. She went back to rubbing my cock. I then reached around and looked inside the drawer and found a packet of condoms “what’s this?” and she replied “I came prepared as well” with a devilish look in her face. I then decided it was time and I manoeuvred on top of her and placed the condom onto my cock. I then proceeded to push my cock inside of her pussy and started pumping in and out. While occasionally moving down and licking and sucking on her breasts. This started her to move in time with every push that I did. Giving both pleasure to her and myself. I went down and kissed her on the lips and moving my tongue in and around playing with hers. As I came back I softly bite her lip and started to move down her neck to her breasts again, circling my tongue on her nipples darting and flicking and sucking. And the occasional nibble as well. At this stage we swapper positions and she was now on top riding me cowgirl style bouncing up and down onto my cock. This went on for well over half an hour. We were nearing our orgasms and she was back on top and started to bounce even harder onto my cock. “I’m cumming” she replied “so am I” and she kept bouncing and I kept on thrusting into her. At that time we came together. We both relaxed and got cleaned up. Afterwards we just spooned the rest of the night naked in each other’s arms. I woke up before everyone else had woken up and got and walked back to my own bed to not let anyone know what was happening.
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Chapter 6: Dinner
The next day was a pretty shit day and we just lounged around watching TV and chatting and other boring stuff. We decided to go for dinner in the evening as we saw this nice restaurant on the way into town and decided to finally check it out. Everyone got ready and just wore casual clothes. I decided to wear a pair of jeans, a T-shirt and my skate shoes. Cassidy decided to wear some denim short shorts, and a tie up top that showed her stomach. Too bad I couldn’t see anything else. When we got there we had to wait like 5 minutes for the 6 tabled spot opened up as all of us. This restaurant was fairly fancy actually, table cover to the floor, seat covers and silver wear all over the place. We sat down and got comfy. Cassidy set beside me and the rest filled the remaining spots. We ordered drinks and relaxed and had a good time knowing it would be our last night in Nelson’s Bay. We then decided to order our food. When the waiter came around I got a rump steak with a side of chips. I am a fairly simple guy. Cassidy got a fancy meal and all I recognised in it was that it had lamb in it. “I bet you like eating meat don’t you?” I said as a joke and everyone cracked up. “Everyone likes meat you idiot” and at that time she grabbed my cock under the table and squeezing it. My face turned red. “What cat got your tongue?” and everyone laughed again. This was going to be a fun night, everyone else ordered and the waiter went off to give the order to the chef. She continued to stroke my cock now and was rendering myself useless. She loved the fact that she had power and that I couldn’t do anything. It was true, I couldn’t do anything. If I tried to return the favour it would of look suspicious, so I had to put on an everything is fine look and relax and enjoy the night. It actually wasn’t that hard to do as I was enjoying it very much.
Our meals came out and she had to stop if she wanted to eat her meal. Which gave me some relief and I was also able to eat my meal. I was seriously hungry I devoured my meal way before anyone was done. I decided on some payback. I dropped my hand below the table and started to massage her pussy through those shorts. She almost starting choking on her food when I started, causing everyone to look up and asked if everything was alright. “Yeah everything is fine, some of my lamb got stuck in my throat for a second” and she continued to get back to her meal. Meanwhile I never stopped rubbing on her pussy but now I had my way under her shorts and found that she had not worn any panties. “I see you finally took me advice” I whispered in her ear, “Yeah why not, you only live once” I was proud, I continued to rub and circle her pussy my index finger, every now and then darting my finger inside and moving in and out. I did this for the rest of the time she was eating. As she was coming to the end of her meal I could feel her also coming to her orgasm, she was moving her hips back and forth with my finger going in and out. As it got faster I could tell she was closer and closer. I picked up pace and went at it. That’s when it happened just as she finished her meal her orgasm hit, she almost threw her cutlery down on the plate and sat back and rode the orgasm all the way through. “Mmmmmmmmmmm, that was a good meal” she replied to cover up the fact that she was moaning in enjoyment. I pulled my hand out and rested it on the table and I noticed it was wet from her excitement. I quickly wiped my hands off with a cloth they give you to avoid suspicion from the others. I felt good that I could give her a taste of her own medicine. That was short lived though, as now she had reached back down and had unzipped my jeans and outsprung my cock that was standing at attention. She started to stroke up and down my shaft as we all were talking and having a good time. I Sat back and was enjoying the pleasure I was receiving. It wasn’t before long before I could feel my orgasm coming on.... She could tell by the way my cock was acting. She knocked over a fork under the table. “Oops let me get it” And as she crawled under the table to retrieve the fork she suddenly started to suck on my cock. I had a look of shock on my face as she moved her head up and down furiously making me cum. Once all it came out she came back up with the fork and took a sip of her drink and swallowed. “Mmmmm that drink tastes nice; when the waiter comes back around I need another one.”
Once we all had enough we got up and left and Ben and I took care of the cheque. We all went back to our place and all had a few more drinks, but instead of brad and I having to have soft drinks we were allowed now to drink some alcohol as we didn’t have to drive. I was having Bundy rum and coke pre mixed can. Everyone else was either having alcho pops or Smirnoff black. But seeing as I don’t like most alcohol I didn’t drink those others. We decided to play some poker. But seeing as we had been drinking someone suggested strip poker and we all agreed... It all started fairly tame; when someone lost they would take off a sock off or a shoe. Until things got down to the shirts and pants coming off. I was the first one to strip down to my briefs, I guess I had a string of bad luck or I suck at playing when I have been drinking. I knew it wasn’t the second option. But I had to call it quits at that, but I did stay and watch the rest of it. The next person to lose was Erin and she was down to her bra and undies, which happened to be a strapless bra and boy short undies. Erin had 34C breasts so they were fairly big, which was gathering a few looks from everyone. I was lucky enough not to get a boner that night as I had been spent from dinner. The next to lose was Brad and he also was down to his briefs, and he had a boner from either looking at Erin or Jessica which was down to her bra and pants still. Rebecca still had her top and jeans on. And Cassidy was also down to what Jessica was. Shorts and her Bra, that’s when she had to call it quits and I knew exactly why. “But you still have your shorts on.” Exclaimed everyone. “But if I lost anymore I would either be topless or pants less and you would be able to see my privates” everyone then knew she wasn’t wearing anything on underneath. It was now down to Rebecca and Jessica in the final hand.
It came down to Jessica winning by only a fraction. We all decided to hit the hay then. Everyone went as is and didn’t bother getting changed. I had the queen bed tonight as it was the last night and it was my turn. About half an hour after everyone had gone to sleep I heard a knock at my door and when I turned around I saw a godly sight, It was Cassidy standing there butt naked walking towards me. She jumped on top of me straight away and started to kiss me. I kissed back; I started to roam my hands over her breasts every now and then trailing down to rub on her pussy. I didn’t wait around for too long, I reached into my bedside draw and grabbed a condom and slipped it on. Without further instruction Cassidy guided my dick into her pussy and started to bounce up and down. I fondled her breasts cupping them with both hands and occasionally flicking her nipples to give that extra stimulation, it was time I flipped her over and started to fuck her missionary style, pumping in out of her rapidly. We laid over one another and made out while I slid in and out, whilst rubbing her clit with my fingers. It didn’t take long before we were both ready to cum and we continued to fuck straight through the orgasms that we had simultaneously. We both fell asleep in each other’s arms again.

Chapter 7: The Party
The next morning we all started to pack up as I got invited to one of my best mate’s 18th party and I asked if the people I was on holidays could come to, he said no worries. He lives on a farm in Newcastle with a massive house and a smaller house on the same property; he lived in the smaller one for privacy and what not. So in other words all his family could be having his party in the main house and all his mates could in the smaller house. It was awesome. Everyone was excited to go, we figured we’d stay the night and back the day after seeing as the apartment we were staying at was only 30 minutes away from my mate. The one condition for him to let the rest of the people with me to stay was that we had to set up. Everyone was fine with that. So we cleaned the apartment up and left, we got there in just over 40 minutes because traffic was a bitch getting out of nelsons bay. Some sort of parade.... When we got there I went up my mate and said my g’day and gave him my present.
We started to setup but there wasn’t much to set up, he only wanted a simple BBQ and some music. So we setup the BBQ outside in the back and just cleaned up the house he was living it. By the time we had finished it was 4pm and the party started at 7pm. The girls went and started to get ready and do all that other shit. I decided I would just chill with Josh and we would catch up and have a few pre party beers and kick back until we started to get ready. At about 6pm I started to get ready, put on some dress pants and a shirt and I was good. Cassidy came down in the purple dress that she got a couple of days ago and somehow she looked even better then what she had back in the store.
So as the party got started we all had a few drinks and it was past that awkward stage in every party. Everyone was mixing and having a good time; they were dancing, laughing and having fun. We got through all the speeches and cake and all that other stuff where we got called into the main house, we all moved back to the other house and that’s when the real party started to happen even though he didn’t want a big party and wanted a relaxed one this party turned into everyone getting shit faced and doing all sorts of stupid shit, I think at one stage someone got dared to walk through the main house naked. Needless to say he was drunk so he said yes no worries.
It was getting to be around 2am and everyone started to crash. I had planned to sleep in the car tonight as I knew other people wanted to stay in the rooms. So earlier I laid out a mat and grabbed my pillow and folded down the chairs in the 4wd so it was just flat all the way back to the driver’s seat. There was room long enough for me to stretch out which was great. So I decided to hit the hay, told Josh I was going to sleep and wished him a happy birthday again. As I got to the car which wasn’t too far from the house I felt someone come up behind me and hugged me as I turned around and it was Cassidy. “I want to stay with you the rest of people are drunk and I don’t know many people” It was fine with me. I jumped in the car and got all the blankets ready but I set them aside as I had no intentions of using them just yet now that she had arrived. I grabbed her and pulled her towards me and kissed her. Gently pulling away letting her feel the slight breath on her lips, moving down to her neck and zigzagging up towards her ear, Whispering “I want you “ then moving back to her lips and ever so softly biting her lip, I slipped her dress off over her head and laid it out on the front seat. I pushed her onto her back holding her firmly in place telling her I was in charge. Kissing down her neck and onto her soft chest. There was no need to reach around and unclip any bras as she was not wearing one. The dress she had worn for the night had only one shoulder. So she couldn’t really wear a bra. I massaged her supple breasts ever so softly and gently kissing and sucking her nipples. Moving downwards over her slender and toned stomach. Reaching her waist I started kissing all the way back up to her lips again and tenderly kissed her softly biting her lip. I started to stroke her left thigh as I was kissing her. I moved my hand back and forth inside and out of her thigh. When I stopped kissing her I reached down and gently removed her sexy purple cheeky lace panties which you could almost see straight through. I started to sensually play with her pussy rubbing back and forth up and down, in circles. I moved down and started to play with my tongue circling around her pussy and probing every now and then. I decided to spread her legs and raised them above my head and continuing to do what I was doing. I was licking and sucking while she was softly moaning and whimpering in pleasure. Every now and then I would come back up and kiss her on her lips and move back down kissing all the way down. And repeating several times and every time trying something different whether it be kissing her neck and whispering words into her ear ever so softly almost just mouthing it. At one stage while I was circling and working the magic I managed to reach behind her leg and gently tickling the bottom of her foot making her giggle and moan at the same time.
It had been over 20 minutes that we had been doing my routine and at this stage I could feel her orgasm finally hitting her, the moaning was getting louder and faster. I knew she was extremely close so I rose back up and started to kiss her again biting her lip softly and with my hand reaching down and circling and inserting my finger rubbing back and forth in and out faster and faster, until the wave hit, this wave seemed to last forever but I did not mind one bit. I continued through it constantly kissing and circling slowly.
When she came off cloud 9 I asked if she enjoyed it. “Best orgasm of my life” But I’m ready for round two and it’s my turn. We started kissing again, while she grabbed my shirt and unbuttoned it one by one moving downwards to my waist. When all the buttons were free I reached back and took off the shirt. She was now kissing down my chest and over my abs and reaching my waist wasting no time unbuckling my belt and tossing it aside; it seemed to come so easy to her on how quick she could take my belt off and my pants as well. At this stage my cock was raging and was standing at full attention. When she took off my pants her hands started to trail up my legs and up my thighs until her hands had reached my cock and started to stroke it up and down, and every now and then giving it a couple of licks to lubricate it so it was easier to stroke, this went on for several minutes while we passionately kissed involved biting lips, necking and kissing her breasts on my part. Not too long after she made her way down kissing my chest once again and over my waist and settling her mouth down onto my cock starting to suck up and down, only doing down halfway and then coming back up while doing that she was also swirling her tongue around my cock as she was sucking and wrapping her tongue around it. This feeling was amazing and I didn’t want it to end so I felt I needed to hold out as long as I could. She had been going for a while when out of nowhere she decided to reach down all the way to the base of my cock and back up then going back down and holding it for a couple of second and then coming back up for some air. This sent me crazy and I could feel my orgasm coming. “Get ready as it’s not too far off” and as I said that the swirling of the tongue action started again and increased pace as well.
It came with fury surging up and out, but what surprised me is that Cassidy never actually stopped bobbing up and down through my orgasm she kept sucking and took it all. What got me is that I kind of knew that she didn’t like it that much. “Thought you didn’t like swallowing” I said “you have to try everything once”. We both sank back down and lied for a couple of minutes as to rest. Even though I was ready to go right away but she was kind of exhausted. We laid there spooning each other naked just chatting about how the holidays were. “Never imagined these holidays to be this exciting and fun” she replied “anytime” I said.
“Are you ready for the final round? It will be sunrise soon” “sure” and that said I put on a rubber but before I could get it on I got stopped. “I want to feel it without one” “I don’t wanna risk it though” I replied and I got the response “Don’t worry I have a morning after in my bag” And with that said she hopped on top of me and sank down onto me and started to rise up and down in a cowgirl position jumping up and down on my cock. I sat up a touch enough to be able to massage her breasts and kiss her at the same time, biting her lips and kissing her top lip only and dragging down till I met with the rest of mouth. Also kissing her neck and nibbling on her ear and whispering words.
I grabbed her hips and pushing her up and down faster. The moans started getting louder and louder, with her saying “Fuck me” over and over again. I didn’t want this to end then and there so I lifted her off and spun her around so we were in a 69 position and I went down on her beginning with my fingers circling and rubbing back and forth side to side moving fairly fast. She has stop talking now and all u could hear were muffled moans as she has started sucking on my dick again going up and down. I also used my tongue and started flicking around in and outside of her pussy. Getting it all lubed up, not that she needed any from me. When I had decided that it was enoug

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Meg’s Revenge
Chapter 3
Taking it to the Cheer squad!

Meg awoke to bright light and she shielded her eyes, she turned her head away from the light and she saw the old woman from the magic shop. “Are you following me or something?”

“Are you serious about your little plot for revenge?” Meg blinked.

“Yes.” Meg said.

“There’s your answer,” The old woman said.

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Meg’s Revenge
Chapter 4
No virgin left behind!

As Meg and the other anthro horse cheerleaders began to fuck and suck each other, peeking out from a corner was one more cheerleader. This was Sadie the only virgin of the group, the shyest and quietest of the group. She was also the most eager to lose her virginity though she was also the most naïve and fantastical. Her dream was to give her virginity to a loving and handsome man but she would sooner find that than a nerd would date a cheerleader and have a successful popularity. Sadie watched them work each other trying her best to be disgusted by the events but she was secretly fascinated. Sadie wouldn’t of admitted it but she was a size freak. Which was why; when she got older and had the money for it she would move to another country and get some implants, in particular, the legendary silly string implants AKA polypropylene implants. They were a unique pair of implants for the breast in which they would irritate the breast tissue causing it to produce fluid and therefore making the breast grow. This implant created some biggest breasted women in the world in particular Chelsea Charms, Minka, Maxi Mounds, and Kayla Kleevage. These women were the epitome of enhanced women in which they enhanced their bodies to the extreme.

Sadie envied these beautiful huge breasted women who were the attraction of men and women alike. However as she watched the former cheerleaders transforming into horse she saw the two of the were growing massive breasts that jiggled and wobbled as the two anthro cheerleaders panted staggered about trying to get accustomed to their bodies. She saw milk leaking from those huge breasts with their fat turgid nipples which quivered in the warm air sticking 3 inches from the breast. Sadie wanted those huge breasts but she didn’t want to become some disgusting half-human, half-animal freak. She had a plan and that plan was simple have these… beasts fuck each other to exhaustion and then when they were exhausted she would go through that bitch Megs stuff. She smirked, this was a foolproof plan with little chance of failure. However It was only like that for as long as Meg didn’t really notice that Sadie was there.

Unfortunately for Sadie, Meg’s new horse ears had picked up Sadie gasps and the wet ‘slursh, slursh’ of Sadies hand fingering her pussy. Now normally a horse wouldn’t have been able to have picked up this sound that easily but Meg was like a super horse now. Double the stamina, double the senses, triple the strength, quadruple the sex drive, and quintuple the organs. She could stick her massive, bulging, vein studded cock in an elephant and it would be a perfect fit. It was rather a miracle that the fucking bitch Cindy managed to get it in her human pussy but now was a new Cindy with a pussy that was mixing with her intestines to create more room for her stallion that was Meg. When Cindy finished transforming she panted deeply and then she gave a snort from her nostrils and she pushed herself to her feet. Instantly she knew that something was different she was… stronger, fitter, and more confident than before but at what price? She stumbled toward the nearest mirror and looked and she gave a braying scream. Before her in the mirror stood an anthro horse, with white fur coat blonde mane and a blonde tail that swished and flicked in the air. However this horse was muscular and had a rather wonderful body large EE-cup breasts, a powerful 6 pack abdomen, green eyes, long elegant legs, a height of 6’8, and finally a large butt easily 45 inches.

She was the pinnacle of Equine beauty it was then that she heard the rumbling footsteps and she turned to see her stallion Meg approach her. Meg was much larger and dominating, standing at 8 feet now, with an impressive 58 inch long and 26 inch thick cock that throbbed, thick veins easily the size of a normal man’s arm pulsed and throbbed. Large MM Cup breasts with soda liter nipples that also throbbed slightly, powerful muscular arms, legs, and abdomen, A large 88 inch muscular butt, and finally large balls the size of a boulder hanging low that gurgled and sloshed swelling up even larger as they filled with powerful, potent, and large amounts of cum. Cindy who had regarded this magnificent creature with disdain and disgust now observed her with love, acceptance, longing. To prove Cindy went to Megs long, hard, throbbing shaft wrapped her arms around and lifting herself she began to rub her body up and down the length. Moaning slightly as her enlarged pussy rubbed against the stallion’s shaft Meg inhaled and nickered slightly enjoying the feel of this Mare’s wet crotch against her huge shaft.

It was then that she heard the other girls whinny behind her and she looked to see that each of the 2 mares and 2 she-stallions had finished their transformation. The two she-stallions were indeed more like smaller versions of her but that didn’t mean that their cocks were something to ignore they were enormous! Easily 29 inches in length and 18 inches in thickness they were ready to fuck. Meg then looked at their balls which looked like overripe melons with thick soda-can sized veins throbbing on the bloated sacks. They also had breasts but they didn’t really grow that much just enough to show they were still female. One stallion had a reddish coat and a white mane her cock was white with pink spots adorning the length. The other she-stallion had a pure brown coat with white spots on her butt cheeks and white arms and hooves her cock was black that lightened along the length.

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Mercy was this terrible. Even without the grammar errors, the plot was thinner than toilet paper, none of the characters had any depth and the descriptions were terrible. Learn to write before you write erotica.

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You can write and spell perfectly with a shit story.

This idea is great and i want... NEED the rest of it