ok, so here's something I wrote up for a friend of mine. Thought I'd throw it up here and see if I can get some constructive criticism on it. This was originally written in texts, hence why it's short and kinda abrupt.

I've been lurking moar for quite a while on /elit/ here and 7; and asstr. First time I've actually written anything.

I would tease your boobs with my tongue while my hand begins to wander lower.
Slowly get my hand down to the sweet spot lightly running my fingers over the lips, taking my time before I begin to slide them inside.
My fingertip slides in and caresses the clit while my mouth keeps working on your nipple.
Work my fingers in deeper, soaking them in your juices. I pull them out and thrust them in deep while my thumb works the clit
I bring you to the edge, but back off at the last moment, doing this until you're begging for release.
Right when you can't take it anymore, I pull my hand away and turn you around.
You're so wet now, that I slide right into your tight hole, and I run one hand up and down your back while my other hand reaches around to your front.
My other hand teases the nipple briefly before heading south once more while I penetrate you from behind.
My fingers find your clit once more while I push myself into you again and again.
My hand on your back grabs your hair and pulls you closer as I go in harder and deeper.
You near climax, and then you're pushed over the edge when you feel my warmth pump into you and fill you up.
Exhausted, you collapse, and feel my seed leak onto your outer lips as I pull out and lie down on the bed next to you.