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335 No. 335 ID: fc9594
(Wrote this on request for a friend accross the pond)
Two people, sitting at the opposite sides of the table.
Time passes, they converse without exchanging words.
Trading ideas, making jokes, enjoying drinks.
When one or the other leaves the table for any reason, there needs to be no break in conversation.
Aimlessly drifting from topic to topic, only the utmost personal things go unmentioned.
When finally their time together is done, they both walk to the door.
Two friends exit two coffeeshops thousands of miles apart, smiling
Knowing even though there was no one at the table with them,
They hadn't been alone.


Criticism is welcome as always!
>> No. 336 ID: e56bd1
when reading the poem on 99chan
and making some observations myself
the realization struck fast
and hard
like the 9.52 direct to Boston Central
that looking at things and sometimes
making a line break
it is not poetry
>> No. 337 ID: fc9594
>>336
So... cut down on line breaks.
right?
>> No. 338 ID: 252a70
Hey some dude I barely know wrote this for me, so all I say, is fuckin' A!
>> No. 339 ID: b6dcba
>>336
Someone's never heard of prose.
>> No. 341 ID: 39df8b
>>336 has a point. Just what the fuck is poetry?
>> No. 342 ID: b979dc
I never put up poetry, just written pieces.
>> No. 343 ID: 3083ec
>>335
I like it. A story about us bros
>> No. 354 ID: 586d98
>>339
That's exactly what I was going to say...
>> No. 370 ID: e4869d
Read this at an open mic night, no one really listened, but there was a smattering of claps
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